10A -- Elevator Pitch No. 1

I have attached my first Elevator Pitch below.  I hope you enjoy and thank you for your time!

Elevator Pitch No. 1

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  1. AnonymousOctober 1, 2018 at 12:06 AM

    I thought your elevator pitch was great! Your tone, professionalism and knowledge about the product definitely showed and helped make your pitch stronger. A suggestion I would make is to try and not say the word "um" when talking since you already have great confidence when talking and to also shorten your elevator pitch to be closer to 90 seconds. Great job!

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  2. UnknownOctober 1, 2018 at 3:09 AM

    Your elevator pitch was very clean and well said! I would just suggest decreasing the amount of times you say "um" and other filler words to cut down your pitch to 90 seconds. I also think that you should work on your movement; it is important to move around your space to get the attention of the people in all sections in front of you, but your teetering can be a distraction to some people when they are trying to listen to what you have to say. Otherwise, great pitch!

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    1. JerrettKOctober 8, 2018 at 12:02 PM

      Thank you for the feedback, Challet! I never imagined I would go over time but I definitely did. I also didn't realize I said "um" so many times; I definitely need to work on that. I think I'll need to find a different space to give my pitch in next time because I didn't have enough room there to walk so I ended up awkwardly swaying . . .

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  3. UnknownOctober 1, 2018 at 8:12 PM

    Hi Jerrett, I really enjoyed watching your elevator pitch!!. You listed statistics, looked professional, and sounded confident in your answers. Using statistics can be a good thing. However, I think the overflow of numbers became confusing towards the middle, and I began to focus on that. I would also suggest showing people the value that this problem has on their life. For example, making the problem more relevant to the audience can really bring people in.

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